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Aha, great insight. Even though I haven't seen this film, the toilet water staining Bud's hand blue is going to stay with me now. I think I hold back, and I'll look for places to commit, now, as I go through my next revision. Thanks, Jennifer.

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Good luck! I'm telling myself I can always cut or dial it back later if needed...

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I needed this today! While revising my novel, I have come upon a high-drama vs. low-drama choice to make... thank you for the reminder to at least consider the more dramatic choice and just see where it leads

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